Discussing Effects-2
Acton is a small town in the Midwest. It has a population of 2,500. It is a safe, quiet, and clean place to live. Last month, Stanley Manufacturing decided to open a large factory in Acton. There are some negative effects the new factory will have on the town. First of all, the factory may bring pollution to the town. The factory would emission the waste gas and pollute the air and water. Consequently, people there can’t breathe fresh air and drink clean water and the pollution would harm their health. Furthermore, it brings many new people to the community and makes the population more complex. There are many people from different places congregate here and that may cause culture conflicts. Moreover, the previous quiet town may turn into a noisy one because more and more people come here; as a result, people can’t lead a life of quietness. All of the effects mean that the factory may bring some negative effects on the town.
很通順~沒啥咪問題喔!
回覆刪除1)many new people 怪怪的
回覆刪除內容很棒呢!長度也比之前長XDD
回覆刪除敘述很完整
回覆刪除難得字體沒有黑白的好文章~
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