2011年6月9日 星期四

Expressing an Opinion-2 --Revised

Students should wear uniforms to school.  Although many people insist that wearing uniforms to school should not be convenient, I strongly believe that if we don't have uniforms, we have to be worried about what we should wear every day, and then we will not study hard because of spending too much time choosing clothes.  While it's true that we don't have freedom of clothes, I believe uniforms will make us look more disciplinal.  Furthermore, more and more larcenies happened in school, what we can do is properly manage the people who enter school.  If we wear uniforms, we can differentiate between students and strangers.  Then, strangers can't enter school easily, and the larcenies will decrease.  In light of all the points mentioned, it's obvious that students should wear uniforms to school.

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