Expressing an Opinion-2

Students should wear uniforms to school.  Although many people insist that wear uniforms to school is't convenient, I strongly believe that if we don't have uniforms, we have to be worried about what we should wear every day, and then we will not study hard because we will spend time choosing clothes.  While it's true that we don't have freedom of clothes, I believe uniforms will make us look more disciplinal.  More and more larcenies happened in school, what we can do is properly manage the people who enter school.  If we wear uniforms, we can differentiate between students and strangers.  Then, strangers can't enter school easily, and the larcenies will decrease.  In light of all the points mentioned, it's obvious that students should wear uniforms to school.

Expressing an Opinion-1

I'm not on the same page as those who oppose using the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment.  Although many people insist that using the death penalty is cruel, I strongly believe that the punishment can decrease the crime rate because by doing that, those who are going to commit crimes will stop to think before they do illegal things.  In addition, no one can argue against the fact that if we punish the criminals by using the death penalty, the victims won't worry that the criminals will hurt them again.  Moreover, too many criminals will commit the same crimes because thay think that what they did will not threaten their lives.  Consequently, it's for all the above-mentioned reasons that I believe we should use the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment.

Comparing-2--Revised

There are several similarities between John Adams and Thomas Jefferson.  First of all, the death date of John is like Thomas’s, which was in July 4, 1826.  In addition, John was as important as Thomas in the American Revolution.  Also, both John and Thomas were delegates to the Continental Congress.  Moreover, John and Thomas were alike the signer of Declaration of Independence.  Additionally, the position of John was similar to that of Thomas.  Besides, John studied and practiced law.  Likewise, Thomas studied and practiced law.

Comparing-1--Revised

There are several similarities between Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman.  First of all, Stephanie is the same age as Ann's.  In addition, both Stephanie's and Ann's eye color are brown.  Moreover, Stephanie is as tall as Ann.  Also, Stephanie's and Ann's hair color are alike black.

Contrasting-2

I am hiring a new English instructor for my school and I receive two resumes from people applying for the job.  They are Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines.  After reading their resumes, I choose Lynn Whitnall to be my school's English instrutor for some reasons.  First of all, Lynn has experience in the position of English instructor from 1997 to 2000 while Debra doesn't.  Furthermore, Lynn has awarded a prize which praise him for his excellence in teaching in 2004.  However, Debra doesn't have any awards.  Next, Lynn is fluent in Spanish, French, and Japanese.  On the other hand, Debra is just fluent in French.  Moreover, Lynn has more teaching experience than Debra does.  Lynn has taught since 1997.  In contrast, though Debra has experience in teaching, he is just a swimming teacher.   As a result, I prefer to choose Lynn to be my school's new English instructor.

Contrasting-1

There are two apartments, Fairfax apartments and CAMPUS APTS, which I can choose and there are serveral differences between them.  First of all, the former apartment has two large bedroom apt while the latter one has only one bedroom apt.  Furthermore, Fairfax Apartments is furnished, whereas CAMPUS APTS isn't.  Moreover, unlike Fairfax Apartments, pets are allowed in CAMPUS APTS.  Finally, the former apartment's rent is 1250 a month and all utilities included.  On the othe hand, the latter one's rent is 900 a month and plus utilities.  If I can choose one of them, I would choose CAMPUS APTS for its rent is cheaper.

Comparing-3

There are two reataurants, Kelly House and John House, which I have ever been to and I think there are several similarties between them.  First of all, both Kelly House's dishes and John House's are cheaper.  Their price ranges from one hundred dollars to two hundred dollars.  Furthermore, the food quality is similar to the quality of John House.  They alike offer us high quality food and the dishes taste delicious.  Moreover, Kelly House's service is as good as John House's.  Kelly House's waiters and waitress are always polite while they place the dishes on the table.  Likewise, John House's stewards and stewardess are always careful.   Next, the speed of serving food in Kelly House is fast like the speed of John House.  We only have to wait less than ten minutes for the dishes.  Both of  the two restaurants are good restaurants.

My favorite season--Revised

Among the four seasons of a year, I like autumn most for some reasons.  First of all, autumn brings cool wind and I always feel comfortable and cool.  When I walk along the street in autumn, I can feel relaxed.  Furthermore, the temperature in autumn is moderate and I would not feel sticky or cold.  Additionally, there is less damages in autumn.  But there is drought in summer and cold current in winter.  Finally, the weather is neither too hot and nor too cold.  Thus, we can do many outdoor activities without being worried about being sunburned or frostbitten.  I always enjoy autumn and it is my favorite season for these reasons.