2011年4月27日 星期三

comparing-2

There are several similarities between John Adams and Thomas Jefferson.  First of all, John died in  July 4, 1826.  Similarly, Thomas died in  July 4, 1826.  In addition, John was as important as Thomas in the American Revolution.  Also, both John and Thomas were delegates to the Continental Congress.  Moreover, John and Thomas were alike the signer of Declaration of Independence.  Additionally, the position of John  was similar to the position of Thomas.  Besides, John studied and practiced law.  Likewise, Thomas studied and practiced law.

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  1. John died in July 4, 1826. Similarly, Thomas died in July 4, 1826.
    要不要合成一句比較不會有這麼多重複的字~
    要不要有結論句阿?

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  2. were delegates 應該改 were delegated唷!
    這篇比上一篇長度多兩倍...

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  3. 1.Additionally, the position of John was similar to the position of Thomas.
    可以寫成~similar to that of Thomas.
    2.可是我覺得你的both John and Thomas were delegates to the Continental Congress沒有錯耶~
    delegates 可以當作名詞丫,是"代表"的意思!

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  4. 1)were delegates要改成were delegated,如果delegates要用名詞後面的to是不是應該改成of

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