There are several similarities between Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman. First of all, Stephanie is the same age as Ann's. In addition, both Stephanie's and Ann's eye color are brown. Moreover, Stephanie is as tall as Ann. Also, Stephanie's and Ann's hair color are alike black.
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有點短...
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